Comments on: Friday Fun http://hddodson.com/writing-2/friday-fun-4/ Aspiring YA Author Thu, 16 May 2013 05:12:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 By: Creepy Query Girl http://hddodson.com/writing-2/friday-fun-4/#comment-102 Creepy Query Girl Sat, 22 May 2010 13:56:27 +0000 http://hddodson.com/?p=133#comment-102 I like that pitch but it could be more detailed maybe? Nathan Bransford is da bomb. For mine, this is the best I got for the moment:

Pagan teen Avery Desjardins will face hard questions about the meaning of faith and love during her first year in the small town of Coventry, Connecticut.

]]> By: Roland D. Yeomans http://hddodson.com/writing-2/friday-fun-4/#comment-101 Roland D. Yeomans Sat, 22 May 2010 06:41:03 +0000 http://hddodson.com/?p=133#comment-101 Talking of one liners …

Have you thought of joining the Logline Blogfest?

http://timeguardiansaga.com/blog/?p=772

I'd like to see the logline you would write, Roland

]]> By: Shannon http://hddodson.com/writing-2/friday-fun-4/#comment-100 Shannon Fri, 21 May 2010 14:56:52 +0000 http://hddodson.com/?p=133#comment-100 Ooo I like this. Darkening world and a villain she love conjures up great imagery. Nice.

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