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January 25th, 2013

What I Learned from Pitch Wars

by Holly Dodson

By the time this posts, Pitch Wars will have come to an end.  I’m writing this in advance because even though the “prize” of this contest was technically requests from agents, I found it elsewhere.

I found my own prize in my mentor, and once again in the completely amazing community of YA writers out there.

But what did I learn?

  1. How to add depth to characters. One tip my mentor gave me was to add some form of internal dialogue anywhere that I find a chain of dialogue three or more lines long.  –  BRILLIANT.
  2. Start at the beginning.  Okay, duh, I know.  But I have struggled with this story’s beginning for a YEAR now with some saying add, some saying hack away, and never really honing in on the problem: that it started at the turning point, not at the beginning of the story!
  3. How to work on a deadline.  And it’s hard.  But I work well under pressure.  :)

And I’m sure I learned more than that (and more than you want to read about in a numbered list), but the idea here is that no matter who got requests or didn’t in the contest, ALL of us came away as winners.  We’ve all got awesome pitches, awesome openings, and awesome new friends in this crazy industry (And perhaps a propensity to overuse the word awesome?).

That’s prize enough for me.

January 23rd, 2013

Pitch Wars

by Holly Dodson

Oh Em Gee, pitch wars is ON!

I’m kind-of full of SQUEE this morning because I forgot!  And then Erinn reminded me!  And EEP!

If you’re at all interested in seeing the pitch and first 250 of my novel THE RIDDLE OF LEGEND, which my super fantastical mentor Danielle Ellison worked on with me, jump right over to Brenda Drake’s blog and see!

My lovely friends Erinn, Megan, and Ghenet are also up for the war today, so look for them too!  Good luck to you all!!  <3<3

January 14th, 2013

The Soccer Mom and the Novel

by Holly Dodson

Well it’s midnight and I can’t sleep, so I figure I may as well blog and get it all off my chest.  I’ll apologize now for anything that doesn’t make sense.

So I had an awesome chat with my amazing mentor for pitch wars Sunday morning.  I swear, I feel so lucky to have Danielle as my mentor.  Not only is she brilliant (and she is very brilliant), but she also likes Doctor Who and Merlin and all the right TV shows, and that’s just full of WIN in my book. But we’re here to talk writing, not TV.  Not today anyway.

I’m laying in bed trying to go to sleep running through all the things Danielle and I discussed today about my story and directions I can take to make it even better.  You know how that goes…every time you close your eyes a new idea pops in your head and you have to run through how that would play out and fit with the rest of the story.  Yeah.  No wonder writers tend to have sleepless nights.  Anyway, amidst that I got to thinking about soccer.

Yep, Super Spawn is playing soccer.  I am an official soccer mom and loving every bug-bitten, freezing cold, hard-bleacher-sitting minute of it.  (And that was not intended sarcastically.  I really am loving it.)

(And as a side note, I’m starting to feel like I could make a writing analogy out of any scenario.  Maybe I’ll make it a game.  We’ll see how many I can come up with this year.  Ha. Feel free to tell me to shut up already.)

So soccer and writing.  Fun stuff.  When you’re playing soccer (or watching, as I am) the ball gets passed around a lot.  It gets run up field and down field and out of bounds, all the while you’re trying to steer it in direction of your goal.  You have that target and you know how to get it there, but making that dumb round bit of bouncy leather GET there, well, that’s the challenge.  Then you’ve got people out there blocking and parrying your moves.  Trying to knock you off course or even steal the ball right out from under you.

Nobody is in the wrong here.  They have a goal too.  It’s how the game is played.  You kick to your teammate, they kick a bit off course, and before you know it the whistle is blowing and the ball is being thrown in the other direction.  You’re scrambling to catch up and redirect it back toward that silly little goal with the ever-so-competent goalie.

It’s exhausting just talking about soccer.  But really, how different is all that from writing a book?  You write it, you get it beta’d, you edit it, and you kick it out there, hoping for the best.  Then that defensive player smashes it halfway down the field and you’re backtracking, trying to scramble and pull the game together again.

The thing is, no matter how many times the goalie deflects you, no matter how many trips up field you have to make, as long as you’re playing, you’ve got a chance at bringing home the win.

As Super Spawn himself says, “Never, ever give up. If you keep trying then you’ll learn to do it.”

How did I raise such a wise little boy?

And as a treat for enduring yet another writing is like THIS post from me, here’s (rather cute) proof of my soccer mom status:

 

Super Spawn is the goalie here.

Super Spawn is the goalie here.

March 14th, 2012

Being Tired and Eye Rolls

by Holly Dodson

I’ll tell ya, there’s nothing quite like the exhaustion that comes from sitting in a waiting room for twelve hours.  That’s what I did on Monday.  All is well, but my eyelids are still heavy.

Anyway, as I mentioned on Monday, I’m doing some real polishing on my WIP right now.  You know, the part where you realize EVERY OTHER WORD in your manuscript is AROUND.  lol

It’s LIKE everyone’s EYES are JUST looking AROUND to see SOMETHING.  As if you can’t tell, those are my big offender words.  I was absolutely cracking up at myself in the waiting room as I realized how many times I can use AROUND in a single page.  Holy crap!

If you’ve never used WORDLE, do yourself a favor and check it out.  I plug my MS in and when the word cloud pops up it’s glaringly obvious what I need to work on.  You would be amazed at how much tighter a sentence gets by taking out that one word.  Or how by reworking a few eye rolls into other actions can make the times your MC does roll her eyes much more meaningful.

I know this is probably the most tedious part of the revision process, but it’s also when that WIP starts to glow.  So, this is your friendly reminder to keep your crutch words in check.

Tell me, do you do this in revision?  Do you find it helpful or do you loathe it?

 

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March 12th, 2012

Monday Inspiration

by Holly Dodson

I’m away from the computer today, just in case you’re wondering.  Not that you are.  Today I’m actually perched somewhere in a hospital waiting room (don’t worry, it’s not for anything serious) doing those tiresome things called line edits.  Oy.  Of course they’re totally necessary even if they aren’t the most fun part of revisions.

So, since I’m stuck in tedium, I thought I’d share a bit of inspiration with you.  Hope you enjoy.

 

 

Happy Monday, friends.  :)

February 22nd, 2012

Use Your Imagination

by Holly Dodson

The imagination is a funny thing.  It has this ability to weave stories from out of nothing more than a single word, or the very edges of an idea.  It twists and turns and shapes a mish-mash of images and thoughts into something complete and comprehensible.

 

But it can also go dark.

At times, my imagination turns against me.  Shadows in the dark shift into monsters.  The sound of a snapping twig grabbed hold of by my imagination turns into a predator stalking me in the dark…something otherworldly and hungry.  Or even worse, the sharp sting of the what if scenarios that have the power to reduce me to tears.

Then there are the times sitting in my living room watching Super Spawn’s imagination, and that is a thing of wonder.  Through his little eyes the couch morphs into the Mystery Machine, a hula hoop becomes the perfect monster trap, and he and I are an unstoppable mystery-solving duo.

Something I’ve discovered about myself and my writing is that I don’t like to use the dark side of my imagination.  In truth, I’m scared of it, and have always done my best to suppress it.  The book I’ve been revising is a thriller, and the last notes I received on it said something to the effect of, “This isn’t the worst it can get, take it one step further.”

Through writing that one extra scene and allowing my imagination to grab hold of it’s dark side, I really unleashed my characters.  After that it all came tumbling out — those little missing bits of personality, those last chunks of who they are were finally exposed in all their raw glory.   By holding back the darkest side of my imagination, I had inadvertently hampered my writing.

So don’t be afraid to use those fears that crop up when you least expect them.  Don’t push them back, harness them and force them to work for you instead of against you.

 

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February 15th, 2012

My New Toy

by Holly Dodson

So for the last three years  I’ve been writing on a teeny tiny 10.1 inch netbook (and that’s ridiculous).  THREE YEARS and three novels on the smallest keyboard known to man.

But not any more!  I have a new best friend:

Isn’t it just lovely?!  The keyboard is so nice to type on, it’s like my fingers are in hyper drive.  Full. Of. Awesome.  It’s fast, and shiny, and FAST.

If I were a better poet, I’d write it a love poem.  But I’ll save you that experience.  ;)

My revisions are going quite smoothly on the new toy.  I’m not sure if it’s the inspiration and ease of the new computer or just that things are clicking, but either way I am a HAPPY GIRL.  (Not to mention that I have some of the most awesome beta readers ever helping the revising along!)

Funny story.  (Not really, but I like to tell stories even if they aren’t funny, so humor me.)  In 2009 I wrote my first novel…well, the first whole novel I ever wrote.  And I thought, hey, I need a laptop so I can transcribe all of these notebooks (yes, a handwritten novel) into a word doc and figure out what to do next!  So I bought a netbook and told myself that if I kept at it, one day I’d buy myself a nice laptop.

It’s pretty obvious three years later that I’m keeping at it.  In fact, I’ll never give up the joy I’ve found in writing these silly books (that aren’t silly at all, it’s just a fun word).

You tell me, have you promised yourself anything like this?  Have you followed through on that promise?

February 8th, 2012

Again and Again

by Holly Dodson

I was just sitting here staring at my planner, which looks something like this:

Work stuff, work stuff, work stuff, and yes, more work stuff.  Revisions, revisions, revisions, revisions, revisions. BEACH.

 

This beach, actually.  For real.

 

There is a light at the end of the tunnel, folks.  ;)

So, yeah, as if all my revision and beta talk hasn’t been clue enough, I have officially taken the dive back into TATE’S HELL.  That sounds…horrible.  I dove into Hell?  Nah, it’s not that bad.  Though sometimes I do feel like beating my head against a wall.  I think we all reach that point at times.

I did a LOT of reading over the past few weeks while I waited for feedback and then allowed it to percolate, and I’m refreshed.  I’m ready to get my hands dirty again.

Plus, guys, I get to go to the beach this weekend which is going to be full of awesome.   The weather is lovely here in good ole’ Florida, and the ocean is calling my name.  Maybe I can take some pages with me to work on…I may just find the answer to all my troubles buried in the sugary sand.

I can’t wait.

 

 One of my new favorite quotes for revisions.

 

Have you guys got any fun and inspiring adventures planned for this weekend?

October 24th, 2011

A Successful Weekend

by Holly Dodson

So…I finished another round of revisions Saturday on my WIP.  What did I learn?  That with five hours of uninterrupted time a day I could rule the world.  For real.

It was lovely, Super Spawn went to the movies with grandpa and the house was so deliciously quiet.  I sat at the dining room table and worked and worked and worked.  It was the most focused I’ve been in a long time, and it was so nice.

In fact, as backward as it seems, it’s exactly what I needed to recharge my writing batteries.

Now I’m kinda in this weird limbo place where the WIP is waiting for more feedback and I really, really want to write something.  But I was going to do NaNo so I should wait.  But I really, really want to write.  ;)

So maybe I’ll just write and not count the words toward my NaNo goal.  lol  I mean, if the muse is there, why tell her to hold on, right?  Write!

I’d love to hear how all of your projects are coming.  Who all is doing NaNo this year?  I personally feel a little insane for attempting it since I just did this a month ago, but hey, whatever.  Nobody ever accused me of being normal.  ;)

October 13th, 2011

Character Development

by Holly Dodson

So, number one on my revision list for my WIP is character development.  Not necessarily for the main character either, though she’ll get her share of attention.

Right now, I’m focusing on my supporting characters and how to bring their personalities to life without bogging the story down.

That’s a tall order to fill, and probably one of the most important.

What did I do?  Well, I made a spreadsheet of course.  ;)

I’m not sure if you can see that very well, but it’s a quick-reference sheet of sorts. I have physical traits, age, interests, and the GMC (Goal, Motivation, Conflict) for each character listed for easy reference. So when I’m revising, I have my bullet list of what I’m looking to add/change, and my one-page spreadsheet on characters. That way if I hit a spot and go, hmm, would Blair really say this here? I can glance at the list and know my Yale-bound mathlete probably would not.

And it’s funny how the smallest changes can have such a large impact on the sound and overall presentation of a character.  It’s not even necessarily about what they say so much as how they say it sometimes.  :)

What do you do to help define characters?  Any tips you’d like to share with me?