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January 25th, 2013

What I Learned from Pitch Wars

by Holly Dodson

By the time this posts, Pitch Wars will have come to an end.  I’m writing this in advance because even though the “prize” of this contest was technically requests from agents, I found it elsewhere.

I found my own prize in my mentor, and once again in the completely amazing community of YA writers out there.

But what did I learn?

  1. How to add depth to characters. One tip my mentor gave me was to add some form of internal dialogue anywhere that I find a chain of dialogue three or more lines long.  –  BRILLIANT.
  2. Start at the beginning.  Okay, duh, I know.  But I have struggled with this story’s beginning for a YEAR now with some saying add, some saying hack away, and never really honing in on the problem: that it started at the turning point, not at the beginning of the story!
  3. How to work on a deadline.  And it’s hard.  But I work well under pressure.  :)

And I’m sure I learned more than that (and more than you want to read about in a numbered list), but the idea here is that no matter who got requests or didn’t in the contest, ALL of us came away as winners.  We’ve all got awesome pitches, awesome openings, and awesome new friends in this crazy industry (And perhaps a propensity to overuse the word awesome?).

That’s prize enough for me.

January 23rd, 2013

Pitch Wars

by Holly Dodson

Oh Em Gee, pitch wars is ON!

I’m kind-of full of SQUEE this morning because I forgot!  And then Erinn reminded me!  And EEP!

If you’re at all interested in seeing the pitch and first 250 of my novel THE RIDDLE OF LEGEND, which my super fantastical mentor Danielle Ellison worked on with me, jump right over to Brenda Drake’s blog and see!

My lovely friends Erinn, Megan, and Ghenet are also up for the war today, so look for them too!  Good luck to you all!!  <3<3

October 25th, 2010

The Conference Experience

by Holly Dodson

Hundreds of writers, a plethora of agents, editors, and publishers, plus workshops on everything from your first page to marketing plans.  There’s only one place you get all of this awesome stirred up together — conferences!

Well, the conference started at 7am Saturday!  Oy.  So, we had a genre meet and greet which was super fun.  I didn’t get to meet any YA writers, but I met a bunch of awesome MG writers.

The first session that morning was on engaging the YA reader (which wound up more geared to MG).  I missed about the first half of it though because I wound up with the very first pitch appointment that morning!  That was pretty darn lucky.  Well, I hated to miss a big chunk of the YA talk, but I was very happy to get to meet the agent before she had been stuck in that room all day long.

Now, the pitch was a source of much angst for me.  It’s intimidating!  And as much helpful information as I found out there from agents and the like, I didn’t find much from fellow writers.  So, I thought I’d include what happened in my pitch for you guys.  Take from it what you will, maybe it’ll help someone not be so nervous about the process.

It wasn’t until about two minutes before I walked in that I got nervous.  The nerves only lasted briefly though, I was fine once I got to talking with the agent.  This is how it went for the most part:

Agent:  So, what are you here for today?

Me:  I wrote a YA novel called Emerald’s Keeper.

Agent:  Tell me about it.

Me:  In Emerald’s Keeper the world is getting darker, light-consuming creatures feed on the pure of heart, and fourteen-year-old Mandy is the only one that can stop them, but she has to find the strength to let go.

Agent:  Oh, really?  What does she have to let go of?

And so it went!  She asked questions, I answered.  She asked about the main plot, themes, subplots and the like.  Once we were done she said she liked my premise very much and asked that I send some pages.  Just that easy!  There was even a little time left to chit chat on a more personal level.  You know, just asking, “How was your flight?” or whatever.

I can honestly say if I ever do another pitch, I won’t be nervous.

Another great thing about conferences?  So, maybe I’m a little anti-social in person, I’m a writer, I think it’s a pre-requisite.  lol  At lunch I found an empty table and pulled out my nook, thankful for a little time to rest my brain.  A few minutes later a lady came and sat beside me (who I assumed was another writer).  We chit chatted a bit and she asked what I write.  I told her, and asked what she did.

She was an agent.  Guess I should have studied the faculty list better!  But then we talked a little more and she slid me her card and asked that I send her my materials.  How freaking cool, right?!  A minute later an agent that reps screenwriters came and joined us and I got to be included in their shop talk.

I also got to attend a session on marketing.  It was pretty good, I learned what a press kit is, and what goes in it.  They also talked about blogging and being on twitter as important steps.  (check, check)  Something that worried me a bit though was that the lady teaching the class suggested putting a press kit together to hand agents you have pitch sessions with.  Eep!  Not sure that would be a very good idea.  I almost said so, but I didn’t want to challenge her during her own session so I held my tongue.

I got the impression that a good portion of the people there were doing self publishing, so maybe having printed press kits would be a good idea in that situation.  I don’t know, I’m not a marketing genius by any means.

The last session I went to was on narrative drive.  It was really interesting the way he took parts of three different books and showed us on a sentence-by-sentence basis how the writer moved the plot forward and kept the reader hooked.  He also said this that struck a chord with me: No matter what you write, these four words need to drive it: tell me a story.

So simple, yet so true.

That’s really it!  I mean, other than my tire blowing out on the way home it was an excellent trip.  But I figure for all the good something bad had to balance it out.  ;)

There you have it, my friends!  If you get the chance to go to a conference, even a small local one, do it.  It’s so worth it!

September 24th, 2010

Friday Fun – Pitching

by Holly Dodson

I’m sure you can all guess this, but I’m still gathering info on pitching to an agent. Lo and behold on Monday morning what should pop into my Google Reader but another more than helpful post by agent Rachelle Gardner. Her posts are always spot on. Here is the list she gives for questions you need to have the answers to in order to give a good pitch. Some of these I really would never have thought of.

11 Questions for Crafting a Pitch: (According to Rachelle Gardner)

1. What genre is your book?

2. What’s most unique or special about your book?

3. Who is the protagonist and what’s the most interesting thing about him or her?

4. Who is the antagonist and how is he/she standing in the way of the protagonist’s goal?

5. What conflict, dilemma or choice does the protagonist face?

6. What are the consequences of the choice or conflict?

7. What is the main event that gets the story started?

8. What are the main points of action that drive the plot?

9. What is the setting of the story?

10. What is the interesting backstory that affects your characters in the current story?

11. What is the book’s theme?

Pretty awesome, right? Now to get to work answering them. ;)

September 21st, 2010

Tipsy Tuesday – Pitch Heaven

by Holly Dodson

I must give credit for the amazing content of this post to Susan. She directed me to Rachelle Gardner’s blog where I found these awesome tips.

As promised, this is my first installment of oh-my-god-I’ve-got-to-pitch-to-an-agent-and-am-FREAKING-OUT. Catchy title don’t you think? lol

Okay, so Rachelle has this wonderful post with tips for a successful pitch. (To read her whole post click the link)

First thing she says is not to dive right into your pitch when you sit down. Take a minute to introduce yourself, ask if the agent is having a nice morning, whatever. If you take just a bit of time for some small talk it will really calm you down.

I totally agree with this. I have, actually, met with an agent before, and can say from experience that the small talk gave me a second to readjust my mind so that I wasn’t shaky and nervous. It also helped to have made some comments on the agent’s blog, so I was able to reference a specific post and have that common ground between us.

Rachelle also says to be sure you have a tagline (20 words or less that encompass your story) ready at a moments notice. You’ve all got taglines right? They’re handy for your query too.

The pitch. Rachelle says it should be 2 to 3 minutes long, and be sure to allow the agent to ask questions as you speak. That means it needs to be more a basis of conversation than a memorized speech.

Speaking of questions, be ready to answer them. The agent may ask things like:

What published author would you compare your writing to?
How does your story end?
What is your character’s motivation?
Have you worked with a critique group?
Etc.

Wow, so that’s just a brief overview of Rachelle’s tip-packed post. I hope you find the information as helpful as I have! Have you all read any particularly helpful posts on pitching? Or do you have any tips you’ve learned first-hand? If so, share in the comments!

September 17th, 2010

Friday Fun – Preparing for a Conference

by Holly Dodson

So I’m going to a conference in October. It’s only about four hours from me, so it’s not something I have to make major travel plans for. I do, however, like to over analyze and be sure that I will have absolutely everything I could possibly need during the conference.

Hotel — check! I would always recommend staying in the hotel where the conference is being held. I made my reservation months ago to be sure I’d have a spot.

Transportation — check! Has car, will drive! The benefit of going to a conference rather close to home.

I also ordered a new tote bag for my netbook and conference materials. The last tote I bought for a conference has been used so much day-by-day that I’m holding my breath for the strap to snap in half. I ordered a Nine West Hobo that is big enough for all my stuff…I can’t wait to get it!

The biggest and scariest thing I have to plan for is my pitch session. Yes, I’m taking the plunge and meeting with an agent to pitch her my book. AAAAAAAAA!!!! (That was from excitement and nerves. Sorry. lol)

It took all of that for me to say this…over the next few weeks I’m going to be doing posts about pitching to an agent. Everything that I learn, I’m going to pass on to all of you. So if anyone out there has a pitch session coming up soon, well, you’ll have lots of resources right here!

Now I want to know — What kind of things do you do to prepare for a conference?

I make lists. Packing lists, to-do lists, shopping lists, lists of lists. And I make them over and over to settle my nerves.