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July 13th, 2011

Road Trip Wednesday — Oh, my bad!

by Holly Dodson

Road Trip Wednesday is a ‘Blog Carnival,’ where YA Highway’s contributors post a weekly writing- or reading-related question that begs to be answered. In the comments, you can hop from destination to destination and get everybody’s unique take on the topic.

This Week’s Topic:
What’s the biggest writing / querying / publishing mistake you’ve made?
 
 
Well this should be entertaining.
 
This was a few years back, right about the time I finished my very first manuscript.  Oh, yeah.  You know where this is going.
 
I have a friend locally who writes as well.  She writes adult fantasy, and we like to get together and write on occasion.  So, we planned to go to a local writers conference.  My friend was already a member of the writers group putting the conference on — so she nabbed us a couple of pitch sessions with agents.  Awesome, right?
 
–insert freakout–
 
The agent was lovely and sweet and funny and easy to talk to, but I realized about the time I walked into that room that I wasn’t close to ready for this.  I mean, I had spent the few months prior scouring the internet and trying to learn everything I could, but — yeah.  Not. Ready.
 
Things turned out alright — the agent liked my concept and requested to read pages.  I went home and, lesson learned, truly immersed myself into the world of publishing.    
 
Yes, the agent ultimately rejected that MS.  Of course.  But some good came from it — number one, I realized what I needed to do if I was serious about going after publication.  And two, I made a personal contact with one of the nicest agents in the industry.  That agent will forever have my respect for treating newbie me so kindly.

I still cringe when I think about it though.  ;)
 
What about you?  Made any cringe-worthy mistakes?

April 19th, 2011

Query Letter Blogfest

by Holly Dodson

Erinn, Alicia, Pam, Quita, and I have joined forces again, and this time we’ve brought you the Query Letter Blogfest!

Today is the day!  Whoever signed up will post their query letter, and then we will all jump around and critique each others.  We hope this will be an excellent learning experience for all involved.

Now, I up to this point, have not talked about the querying that I’m doing on the blog.  But, I am currently querying HAPPILY NEVER AFTER, which you may have guessed by now.  ;)   So, I’m going to share my query letter, which has been quite successful so far.
Dear [Agent name spelled correctly],

[Something very personalized, like mentioning a specific blog post where they expressed interest in high-concept YA, or fairy tales, or something of the like.]  As such, I believe you may be interested in my 53,000 word young adult fantasy, HAPPILY NEVER AFTER.

Sixteen-year-old Kate is trapped in a fairy tale, and if she doesn’t escape soon, she’ll lose all her memories. Or worse, she’ll get killed.

Kate’s brother is dying.  Unable to cope with watching him deteriorate, she makes a stupid wish to escape her life in favor of a fairy tale.  But the wish comes true.  And fairy tale land?  Well, it sucks.  Kate is forced to obey an unseen, god-like narrator, who makes Kate dress as a prissy Princess while repeating the same story over and over again — and each time, more of Kate’s memory is lost.  Plus, venomous Prince Charming is out to kill her.  And that’s just great.

Then Kate discovers the secret to escaping this Magical Kingdom of Torture: true love’s kiss, of course.  But the narrator (who is determined to keep Kate trapped) begins to pick apart the story, removing any object, twist, or character that might come to Kate’s aid.  The crazy narrator even steals Nathan, the guy Kate thinks she’s in love with, and replaces him with Jace, a dashing rogue Kate can’t keep her eyes off of.  Now, as Kate clings to her dwindling memories and tries to forge a new path through the fairy tale, she has to choose which guy she really loves.

If Kate chooses wrong, the narrator will trap her there forever, and she’ll live Happily Never After.

HAPPILY NEVER AFTER is similar to THE WIZARD OF OZ and ELLA ENCHANTED, and I believe it may appeal to fans of both. Though the novel has been written as the first in a planned trilogy, it can also stand alone. I’m an active member of SCBWI, the Florida Writers Association, and YALitChat.

[As requested in your guidelines, the first chapter and synopsis are pasted below. ONLY INCLUDE WHAT IS EXPLICITLY REQUESTED .]  [And here I may put something like, "So that you are aware, this is a multiple submission."]  Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Holly Dodson
[phone number]
[link to my blog]
—-
[pages as requested in their guidelines]

So, what do you think?  I can’t wait to read everyone’s!

April 11th, 2011

Query Letter Blogfest

by Holly Dodson

Erinn, Alicia Pam, Quita, and I are joining forces again, and this time we’re bringing you the Query Letter Blogfest!

On April 19th, whoever signs up will post their query letter.  Then, we all jump around and critique each others.  The five of us thought it would be an excellent learning experience for all involved. 

Already agented?  You could post the query that landed the request from your agent as an example!  This is just about helping each other put our best feet forward.

You can sign up over on Alicia’s blog.

Here are a few good articles on writing queries, if you need a jumpstart:

October 25th, 2010

The Conference Experience

by Holly Dodson

Hundreds of writers, a plethora of agents, editors, and publishers, plus workshops on everything from your first page to marketing plans.  There’s only one place you get all of this awesome stirred up together — conferences!

Well, the conference started at 7am Saturday!  Oy.  So, we had a genre meet and greet which was super fun.  I didn’t get to meet any YA writers, but I met a bunch of awesome MG writers.

The first session that morning was on engaging the YA reader (which wound up more geared to MG).  I missed about the first half of it though because I wound up with the very first pitch appointment that morning!  That was pretty darn lucky.  Well, I hated to miss a big chunk of the YA talk, but I was very happy to get to meet the agent before she had been stuck in that room all day long.

Now, the pitch was a source of much angst for me.  It’s intimidating!  And as much helpful information as I found out there from agents and the like, I didn’t find much from fellow writers.  So, I thought I’d include what happened in my pitch for you guys.  Take from it what you will, maybe it’ll help someone not be so nervous about the process.

It wasn’t until about two minutes before I walked in that I got nervous.  The nerves only lasted briefly though, I was fine once I got to talking with the agent.  This is how it went for the most part:

Agent:  So, what are you here for today?

Me:  I wrote a YA novel called Emerald’s Keeper.

Agent:  Tell me about it.

Me:  In Emerald’s Keeper the world is getting darker, light-consuming creatures feed on the pure of heart, and fourteen-year-old Mandy is the only one that can stop them, but she has to find the strength to let go.

Agent:  Oh, really?  What does she have to let go of?

And so it went!  She asked questions, I answered.  She asked about the main plot, themes, subplots and the like.  Once we were done she said she liked my premise very much and asked that I send some pages.  Just that easy!  There was even a little time left to chit chat on a more personal level.  You know, just asking, “How was your flight?” or whatever.

I can honestly say if I ever do another pitch, I won’t be nervous.

Another great thing about conferences?  So, maybe I’m a little anti-social in person, I’m a writer, I think it’s a pre-requisite.  lol  At lunch I found an empty table and pulled out my nook, thankful for a little time to rest my brain.  A few minutes later a lady came and sat beside me (who I assumed was another writer).  We chit chatted a bit and she asked what I write.  I told her, and asked what she did.

She was an agent.  Guess I should have studied the faculty list better!  But then we talked a little more and she slid me her card and asked that I send her my materials.  How freaking cool, right?!  A minute later an agent that reps screenwriters came and joined us and I got to be included in their shop talk.

I also got to attend a session on marketing.  It was pretty good, I learned what a press kit is, and what goes in it.  They also talked about blogging and being on twitter as important steps.  (check, check)  Something that worried me a bit though was that the lady teaching the class suggested putting a press kit together to hand agents you have pitch sessions with.  Eep!  Not sure that would be a very good idea.  I almost said so, but I didn’t want to challenge her during her own session so I held my tongue.

I got the impression that a good portion of the people there were doing self publishing, so maybe having printed press kits would be a good idea in that situation.  I don’t know, I’m not a marketing genius by any means.

The last session I went to was on narrative drive.  It was really interesting the way he took parts of three different books and showed us on a sentence-by-sentence basis how the writer moved the plot forward and kept the reader hooked.  He also said this that struck a chord with me: No matter what you write, these four words need to drive it: tell me a story.

So simple, yet so true.

That’s really it!  I mean, other than my tire blowing out on the way home it was an excellent trip.  But I figure for all the good something bad had to balance it out.  ;)

There you have it, my friends!  If you get the chance to go to a conference, even a small local one, do it.  It’s so worth it!

October 12th, 2010

Tipsy Tuesday – Tracking Queries

by Holly Dodson

I had a brainwave this morning.  How many writers out there have a proficient way to track their queries?  Do you know how to use excel?  Do you pay for one of those tracking services?

I’m really curious.  For my day job I do accounting type things, so I use excel every single day.  It was a natural choice to turn to for my tracking spreadsheet.  But what do other writers use?

For today, I give you — my spreadsheet, and the basic tools to create your own.

And here’s a quick rundown of how to make this jewel:

The title — merge the cells together using the little a symbol with arrows on either side.  Highlight the cells you want to merge and click it.  Bold and increase your font.

Column titles — these work for me, you may want more or different ones.  I just made them bold

Body — fill in all your vital info.  I like to have everything I need to query right there in one place.  Email address, agent name, guidelines — you won’t have to go re-hunting if you have a spreadsheet like this.  One thing I do on the submission guidelines column is wrap the text.  Highlight the cells and click “format” then “cells”.  Then click “alignment” and there’s a little box at the bottom that says “wrap text”.  This way your spreadsheet doesn’t wind up 50 pages wide.

That’s basically it!  You can get fancy with the borders and colors if you want, but with this you’ll never query an agent twice, and will always know what is outstanding.

Helpful?  If you have more questions about excel, don’t hesitate to ask.

September 28th, 2010

Plan of Attack

by Holly Dodson

Who all here as queried before? Let’s see a show of hands.

I’m trying to devise a plan before I start sending queries out all willy-nilly into the world. There are several different strategies I’ve heard.

  1. Just get them out. All at once or within close succession, however you can.
  2. Send out bursts…maybe five or so at a time.
  3. Send out 10 and wait for responses from them all, then send another 10.

I don’t know. *five second panic attack*

Why am I so terrified to start sending queries? I keep trying to come up with things to do instead. I must have read my query letter 50 times in the last week. I can’t find a single word I want to change anymore. The lovely KO has already finished her read-through and gave very positive feedback. It didn’t take me any time to add a couple touches where she recommended.

There’s nothing left to change! *yet another mini panic attack*

Okay, taking deep breaths now. Which plan of attack would you follow? My brain is in shut-down-I-refuse-to-make-a-decision mode.

September 24th, 2010

Friday Fun – Pitching

by Holly Dodson

I’m sure you can all guess this, but I’m still gathering info on pitching to an agent. Lo and behold on Monday morning what should pop into my Google Reader but another more than helpful post by agent Rachelle Gardner. Her posts are always spot on. Here is the list she gives for questions you need to have the answers to in order to give a good pitch. Some of these I really would never have thought of.

11 Questions for Crafting a Pitch: (According to Rachelle Gardner)

1. What genre is your book?

2. What’s most unique or special about your book?

3. Who is the protagonist and what’s the most interesting thing about him or her?

4. Who is the antagonist and how is he/she standing in the way of the protagonist’s goal?

5. What conflict, dilemma or choice does the protagonist face?

6. What are the consequences of the choice or conflict?

7. What is the main event that gets the story started?

8. What are the main points of action that drive the plot?

9. What is the setting of the story?

10. What is the interesting backstory that affects your characters in the current story?

11. What is the book’s theme?

Pretty awesome, right? Now to get to work answering them. ;)

September 21st, 2010

Tipsy Tuesday – Pitch Heaven

by Holly Dodson

I must give credit for the amazing content of this post to Susan. She directed me to Rachelle Gardner’s blog where I found these awesome tips.

As promised, this is my first installment of oh-my-god-I’ve-got-to-pitch-to-an-agent-and-am-FREAKING-OUT. Catchy title don’t you think? lol

Okay, so Rachelle has this wonderful post with tips for a successful pitch. (To read her whole post click the link)

First thing she says is not to dive right into your pitch when you sit down. Take a minute to introduce yourself, ask if the agent is having a nice morning, whatever. If you take just a bit of time for some small talk it will really calm you down.

I totally agree with this. I have, actually, met with an agent before, and can say from experience that the small talk gave me a second to readjust my mind so that I wasn’t shaky and nervous. It also helped to have made some comments on the agent’s blog, so I was able to reference a specific post and have that common ground between us.

Rachelle also says to be sure you have a tagline (20 words or less that encompass your story) ready at a moments notice. You’ve all got taglines right? They’re handy for your query too.

The pitch. Rachelle says it should be 2 to 3 minutes long, and be sure to allow the agent to ask questions as you speak. That means it needs to be more a basis of conversation than a memorized speech.

Speaking of questions, be ready to answer them. The agent may ask things like:

What published author would you compare your writing to?
How does your story end?
What is your character’s motivation?
Have you worked with a critique group?
Etc.

Wow, so that’s just a brief overview of Rachelle’s tip-packed post. I hope you find the information as helpful as I have! Have you all read any particularly helpful posts on pitching? Or do you have any tips you’ve learned first-hand? If so, share in the comments!

September 17th, 2010

Friday Fun – Preparing for a Conference

by Holly Dodson

So I’m going to a conference in October. It’s only about four hours from me, so it’s not something I have to make major travel plans for. I do, however, like to over analyze and be sure that I will have absolutely everything I could possibly need during the conference.

Hotel — check! I would always recommend staying in the hotel where the conference is being held. I made my reservation months ago to be sure I’d have a spot.

Transportation — check! Has car, will drive! The benefit of going to a conference rather close to home.

I also ordered a new tote bag for my netbook and conference materials. The last tote I bought for a conference has been used so much day-by-day that I’m holding my breath for the strap to snap in half. I ordered a Nine West Hobo that is big enough for all my stuff…I can’t wait to get it!

The biggest and scariest thing I have to plan for is my pitch session. Yes, I’m taking the plunge and meeting with an agent to pitch her my book. AAAAAAAAA!!!! (That was from excitement and nerves. Sorry. lol)

It took all of that for me to say this…over the next few weeks I’m going to be doing posts about pitching to an agent. Everything that I learn, I’m going to pass on to all of you. So if anyone out there has a pitch session coming up soon, well, you’ll have lots of resources right here!

Now I want to know — What kind of things do you do to prepare for a conference?

I make lists. Packing lists, to-do lists, shopping lists, lists of lists. And I make them over and over to settle my nerves.

June 25th, 2010

Friday Fun

by Holly Dodson

Turns out I’m a cupcake!! See! (It’s because of my affection for exclamation points, isn’t it?)

Holly’s Result: Cupcakes
on quiz:What Kind of Writerly Snack Are You?
Who: Industry insiders.

When: To celebrate. To sob. At meetings. Whenever anyone’s headed out for an errand – Hey! Grab me a Sprinkles on your way back!
Why: Tender cake and lush frosting? Yes, please. You know what makes the publishing world go ’round.

Fun quiz! Thank you YAHighway for always bringing the awesome! It seems fitting — we’re having cupcakes at Super Spawn’s party tomorrow.

 

On another note…don’t you love it when your crit partner is EXACTLY right and you have to go back and change a bajillion things in your MS?

I do!! lol Sure, it’s work, but it’s so worth it. A special shout out and thanks goes to Susan today! She is so right.

Cupcakes for her too!

Okay, before I get distracted by more yummy snack talk. Most helpful post this week came from agent Mary Kole at Kidlit.com. This post is about tricking yourself for better revisions. A genius idea, really. She says to change the font on your MS and print the pages. It makes you slow down because the words look different, which helps you see errors more easily.

I’m totally trying it, once I finish this round of revisions, for a final polish.

That’s all for today! Have a great weekend, my lovelies, and I’ll see you on Monday.