Archive for January, 2011

January 31st, 2011

From Inspiration to Draft

by Holly Dodson
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Many of you mentioned in my call for feedback that you wanted to talk more about processes.  So, over the next couple weeks I’m going to splash the blog with my own writing processes from the inspiration through the first draft, revisions, and straight through the query.  It’s just the way I do things, and meant to open the floor up for discussion.  :)

Today let’s start with the inspiration.

An idea has fallen from the sky.  It smashed into your head and trickled into all the empty spaces, filling you with excitement.

First: Celebrate.  Run with the idea.  Play it out in your mind.  Maybe this could happen. Or THIS!  OMG THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC!  I am BRILLIANT!  Best. Idea. Ever.

Ponder the idea for a while.  Allow it to snatch all of your daydreams into its strange and exciting world.  This is a very important step in the process.  If the idea loses its spark, if you find yourself thinking of it less and less…maybe it wasn’t such a great idea after all.

Second:  The idea stuck.  You are still sure you’ve come up with the next blockbuster and this character is screaming in your ear and you must. write. this. story.  Excellent!  But now it’s time to work.

Pull out your handy-dandy notebook and take some notes.  What is your basic plot idea?  Who are your main characters?  Who is the bad guy?  What makes this story fun and unique?  Write down all of the big events you dreamed up in Part One of our process.

Third:  Research.  This is especially important if you are writing a story in a historical setting, but it applies to everyone.  You need to know what kind of books are out there in the genre.  Is there anything similar to your amazing shiny new idea?  If it is a historical novel you’ve got double the work.  Language, dress, customs…everything about your story will be effected by the time period.

Fourth:  Outline.  If you outline.  I’ve never been an outliner before.  At least not in the traditional sense.  I (as mentioned in step two) take notes on where I see the story going, but I’ve never done a scene by scene outline.  On my own SNI I am planning to though.  We’ll see how it goes.

Fifth:  Write that first draft, baby!  Let loose and allow your mind to run away with you.  Don’t be too strict with your outline or you may miss an amazing scene opportunity.  Alternately don’t be to lax either or you’ll wind up meandering into nothing.  That’s no fun.

Now, with your first draft in hand, it’s time to really celebrate.  But not for too long, because up next we conquer the dreaded Revision Monster!

What do you think?  Does this sound similar to your own process?

January 28th, 2011

99th Page Blogfest

by Holly Dodson

So, guys today is the day!  Make sure you hop around to all the other bloggers to read all the 99th pages!

Today I give you the 99th page of my first YA novel, EMERALD’S KEEPER, which has been shelved.

Yeah, I’m a cop out.  I’m not putting my WIP up.  It isn’t ready for public scrutiny.  ;)

Page 99 of EMERALD’S KEEPER:

All Class One creatures were part of the challenges. Those were things like the rhests and the spates, which were alligator-like creatures that lived in the trees. It also included squirrels that have been turned. A few Class Two creatures were thrown in for good measure. They were things like the wolves with heat vision and frogs that shot poisonous darts. The only Class Three creature was the phantom, and no Class Fours were allowed.

“What are you over here brooding about?” Chelsea, a junior Earth, plopped down on the couch beside Mandy.

“I’m in the challenge today.”

Chelsea’s freckled face scrunched up. “No fun.”

“Yeah, I’m nervous.”

“You’ll be okay as long as you remember all the spells Mike has drilled us with.” A hint of a smile played at Chelsea’s thin lips when Mandy’s cheeks flushed.

Mandy didn’t know why her cheeks felt the need to betray her like that. She pursed her lips and glanced sideways at Chelsea who burst out laughing.

Anna marched over from the cluster of boys she had been flirting with and raised an eyebrow at Mandy. “What could possibly be so funny?”

Now Mandy started giggling.

Anna obviously didn’t appreciate being left out. “Fine. Be that way.” She flipped her hair and spun around to leave.

“Anna, don’t be like that.” Mandy attempted a serious face, but failed miserably as the giggles continued to escape. “We were just laughing because I’m so hopelessly easy to read.”

Chelsea nodded, her gray eyes wide. “She’s hopelessly in love with Mike is what her problem is.”

“Ah!” Mandy swatted at Chelsea. “I am not!”

There you have it!  And….now I remember why I shelved this.  lol

 

January 27th, 2011

Book Recommendation – Angelfire

by Holly Dodson
Angelfire
By Courtney Allison Moulton

Angelfire (Angelfire, #1) 
 Blurb from Goodreads: When seventeen-year-old Ellie starts seeing reapers – monstrous creatures who devour humans and send their souls to Hell – she finds herself on the front lines of a supernatural war between archangels and the Fallen and faced with the possible destruction of her soul.
A mysterious boy named Will reveals she is the reincarnation of an ancient warrior, the only one capable of wielding swords of angelfire to fight the reapers, and he is an immortal sworn to protect her in battle. Now that Ellie’s powers have been awakened, a powerful reaper called Bastian has come forward to challenge her. He has employed a fierce assassin to eliminate her – an assassin who has already killed her once.”
Okay, so, at first I wasn’t so sure about this book.  You see, I’m a wimp.  Reapers – totally scary.  The first night I picked it up I had nightmares and told myself there was no way I could read the rest of the book.

But I kept thinking about it.  And thinking about it.  I had been hooked.

One thing I really loved was all the action.  Tons of fight scenes, tons of tension.  I flew through page after page just soaking in the fighting.  Obviously, I really liked all the fights.  lol  And WILL!  Oh, Will.  *swoon*  I wish I could pluck him out of the book and keep him all for myself.  Another thing I liked was the religious based undertone of the book.  Nothing preachy, don’t worry.  But I studied philosophy and religion in college along with my English, and it fascinates me.  I think that added to my enjoyment.  It was obvious that Moulton put a lot of thought into her premise, and I applaud her for it.

I definitely recommend you grab a copy for yourself when it is released on February 15, 2011.

January 26th, 2011

Road Trip Wednesday

by Holly Dodson

This week’s topic on the YAHighway is:

If you could live in the story world of one book, what would it be? (any genre!)
I’m willing to bet this will be a popular answer.  I’m totally going with Harry Potter.  I mean, magic!  Hogwarts!  UNICORNS!!
JK Rowling’s world is one that we have all lived in through books for many years, and gosh, to experience in person?!  AFREAKINGMAZING!!
The downside may be if I had to be there during the time of Voldemort.  Let’s face it, he kinda sucked all around.  And of course I’d have to jet back to being eleven years old so that I could go to Hogwarts.  Because what’s the fun of living in Harry Potter world if you can’t experience Hogwarts first hand?! 
Yes, yes.  This is all a great plan.  So, when do we leave?

January 25th, 2011

How do you do it?

by Holly Dodson

Alicia asked last week how I manage a full time job, Super Spawn, and writing.

Okay, seriously.  Here’s a daily line-up of my life.  This is how I do all three:

5:30am – alarm goes off
6:30am – wake Super Spawn
7:00am – Leave the house
7:45am – drop Super Spawn off at preschool
8:00am – work
11:30am – 12:30pm – lunch break where I do something writing related.  Write, revise, blog, research, etc.
5:00pm – leave work
5:30pm – leave preschool with Super Spawn
6:30pm – arrive home
6:30pm – 8:30pm – dinner, bath time, play time, and Super Spawn’s bed time.
9:00pm until – this is when I do most of my writing.  I blog, write, revise, read…all of it.  Some nights I might be up until midnight or 1am just to get up and do it all again the next day.

Is my schedule easy?  Heck no.  But it works for me.  It’s weird, now that I’m not working like crazy on revisions all night long I’m actually more tired every day.  Go figure.

My weekends are packed to overflowing as well.  Saturdays I’m taking Super Spawn to the movies, bouncing at a play place, or to a museum.  Saturdays that Super Spawn is with his dad, I can be found at a coffee shop working away on my WIP.  Sundays are reserved for cleaning every week.  I read, do laundry, grocery shop…that kind of fun stuff.

That’s it.  There’s no big secret to my balancing act other than unwavering dedication.  Sure, there are days that I fall off the wagon and just can’t do anything, but the next day I’m right back in sync.

What about you guys?  How do you maintain balance?

January 22nd, 2011

Who’s The Ninja?

by Holly Dodson
 
 
 
 
Today the ninja brings us a query and synopsis critique for you, my lovelies!
First follower to comment with their email address wins! 
 

January 21st, 2011

Guys!!! LOOK!!!

by Holly Dodson

I’ve hit 100 followers!!!  EEEE!!!!  I feel like jumping up and down and hugging EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU!!

Super special shout-out to my 100th follower – Kate!  Woot!

Okay, the ninja is going to bring forth some SUPER awesome prizes for next week!  Hold onto your hats!

Thank you all SO much for being such amazing followers!  I appreciate every one of you!!

*spins around with arms outstretched to be all dramatic*

January 21st, 2011

An Award, An Interview, and Feedback!

by Holly Dodson

I write for the same reason I breathe…because if I didn’t, I would die. ~Isaac Asimov

 
I love this quote.  Love, love, love it.  It completely conveys the way I feel about writing.  It’s a passion, a compulsion.  I write because I need to.  I want to.  I have to.

Why do you write?  Do you feel the same cord drawing you into the world of words?

If you interested in learning more about me, my WIP, and the like there’s an interview with me going up today over at the lovely Kim’s blog.  Hop on over and see what I’ve got to say.

Thanks, Kim, for having me!

I feel incredibly loved.  Here’s why:  Not only did Kim ask to interview me, but three of my lovely blogging friends have passed me the Stylish Blogger Award!  You guys are so sweet!  Many thanks to Jessica, Sarah, and Carrie!  I’m going to let my interview count as my seven things about me.  ;)   You’ll have to go read it now.  (Note: I’m totally breaking the “rules” for this award.  I don’t do rules well. lol)

Here’s who I’ll pass this to:    All of my lovely followers.  I don’t like to choose favorites.

On another note, I’m interested to hear:  Is there anything specific you would like me to cover on the blog?

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Would you like interviews?  More of the technical side of writing?  Critiques?  Perhaps some techy stuff like the analytics post?

Ask and you shall receive!  Otherwise I’ll continue with my random thought patterns and incoherent babblings.  ;)   Have a nice weekend, lovelies!

(P.S.  The Ninja is going to show up sometime tomorrow, so keep an eye out!)

January 20th, 2011

Book Recommendation – XVI

by Holly Dodson
XVI
By Julia Karr

XVI

Blurb from Goodreads: Nina Oberon’s life is pretty normal: she hangs out with her best friend, Sandy, and their crew, goes to school, plays with her little sister, Dee. But Nina is 15. And like all girls she’ll receive a Governing Council-ordered tattoo on her 16th birthday. XVI. Those three letters will be branded on her wrist, announcing to all the world—even the most predatory of men—that she is ready for sex. Considered easy prey by some, portrayed by the Media as sluts who ask for attacks, becoming a “sex-teen” is Nina’s worst fear. That is, until right before her birthday, when Nina’s mom is brutally attacked. With her dying breaths, she reveals to Nina a shocking truth about her past—one that destroys everything Nina thought she knew. Now, alone but for her sister, Nina must try to discover who she really is, all the while staying one step ahead of her mother’s killer.”

 This was a fantastic book.  Fast paced, always learning something new about the society and world, a little romance, and a young girl standing up for her rights.  Wow.


Nina is an easy character to identify with.  She’s clever and tough, but still has a soft heart.  She would, and does, do anything to protect her little sister.  The world is a lot to get used to at once.  Karr wastes no time with introductions, you just dive right into the world of PAV’s, blasting media campaigns, and teens being portrayed as nothing more than a sex toy.  That’s right.  I said it out loud.  But Nina is different, she doesn’t believe in the propaganda, and longs for a life at a slower pace.

On top of their social caste system, her mother’s death, and her growing infatuation with a boy to deal with, Nina is running from a murderer and searching for the truth.


This is a page turner that you won’t want to put down unfinished.  Karr’s writing and world gripped me from the beginning.  One thing I really liked was that she doesn’t waste too much time on descriptions of the world.  Something is introduced, used, and we’re done.  I like that.  I tend to, uh, skim long detailed passages, so it suited my style.  It definitely gets a high recommendation from me. 


Has anyone else read it yet?  What did you think?

January 19th, 2011

Road Trip Wednesday

by Holly Dodson

Today YAHighway says: Blurb it!  In which we blurb our favorite books or our own work.

So, I give you:

Delirium by Lauren Oliver:  An edge of your seat race for the right to love that will leave you drooling for more.

XVI by Julia Karr:  A shockingly beautiful coming of age story that will keep you up at night.

Meh, okay, I’m no good at this.  lol  (By they way, my review of XVI is coming tomorrow.)

And…wait..what was THAT?  Did you see it?  I think it was a NINJA!!

The first follower who comments (with their email address) today will win:
A collection of Bath and Body Works products!  Twilight woods lotion, body spray, hand sanitizer and the holder thing.  ;)
GO!